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[frankie]

Hello...

My favourite movie was GW5, yeah, you got it right, Gina Wild 5. [...edited...]

Edited April 17, 2006 by M1nDH4cK

[M1nDH4cK]

Hello...

... and good bye !

Suspend 3 zile pentru textul licentios folosit.

[{JM}Alex Lifetaker]

I really liked Shrek because he is a very good movie,and has a lot of funny moments .

I enjoy the main character,Shrek,who is in love with his girlfriend Fiona.In one day they find a invitation from the parents of Fiona.They decide to go at the pallace to see them and talk about their relationship.

From this moment the movie become very funny,but in some moments he is a little sad,because Shrek decide to run away because he wasn't accepted by the parents of Fiona.

So he runed in the forest,where he meet the poss in buts and decided to steal some magic potion from a witch to becamoe beautiful,in hope that parents of Fiona will like him and accept him as a human,not an ogre.

So Shrek managed to steal the potion and drink it,but now he has some troubles getting to the pallace.

This moments really impresioned me because they were full of action and dramatic scenes.

At final he managed to reach the pallace before the magic effect dissapeare and remain with Fiona.At twelve o'clock the magic spell dissapeard and they became again ogres,but their love remain the same.They realised that not the face is what means wehn you talk about love,is the feelings that you feel for the person you love.

I liked this movie very mutch!

P.S: S-ar putea sa fie unele greseli de ortografie sau unele expresii mai nasoale.In general textul este 90% corect din punct de vedere gramatical.

Este tarziu si nu m-am concentrat prea mult ascupra scrierii,te sfatuiesc sa ai rabdare sa mai corectam din el pentru ca sunt sigur ca nu este 100% corect.

Sper ca textul a fost scris la baza...

ca daca a fost de adevaratelea, e trist... nici 6 nu ti-as da

[{JM}Alex Lifetaker]

Varianta corectata de mine(olimpic la engleza)

I really enjoyed Shrek because it is a very good movie,with a lot of funny moments.

I liked the main character, Shrek, who is in love with his girlfriend, Fiona.One day, they receive a invitation from Fiona's parents.They decide to go at the palace to see them and talk about their relationship.

From this moment the movie becomes very funny, but in some moments it is a little sad.The main reason is Shrek's decision to run to run away because he wasn't accepted by the parents of Fiona.

So he run in the forest,where he met the puss in boots and decides to steal some magic potion from a witch to became beautiful,in hope that Fiona's parents will like him and accept him as a human, not an ogre.

So Shrek manages to steal the potion and drink it,but now he has some troubles getting to the palace.

This moments really impressioned me because they were full of action and dramatic scenes.

In the end, he manages to reach the palace before the magic effect dissapeares and remains with Fiona.At twelve o'clock the magic spell dissapeared and they became again ogres,but their love remains the same.They realised that face doesn't matter, but the feelings about the person you lobe.I liked this movie very much!

PS: Nu cred ca am gresit ceva, insa daca am facut-o, sry, am scris textul in 5 minute.

[Zeal]

They decide

They decided

receive

recieved

the parents of Fiona.

cre ca ar suna mai bine "fiona's parents"

So he run

so he ran

some

"some" zici la plural ... aici e cu "a magic potion"

in hope

exista expresia asta ?? eu stiam ca se zice "hoping"

troubles

trouble

impressioned

impressed

In the end, he manages to reach the palace before the magic effect dissapeares and remains with Fiona.At twelve o'clock the magic spell dissapeared and they became again ogres,but their love remains the same.

in prima fraza ai folosit prezentul, iar in a 2a ai trecut la past tense ... nu se prea face asta ... e bine sa fie aman2 la acelasi timp.

face doesn't matter

eu cre ca s-ar potrivi mult mai bine "looks don't matter"

lobe

aici cred ca stii cum se scrie ... ai apasat pe langa taste =)

I liked this movie very much!

incheiere naspa rau treia sa mai dezvolti putin

deci nuj la ce olimpiada ai fost tu ... dar daca la aia de engleza dadeai o astfel de compozitie nici nu stiu daca luai 1 sfert din punctaj

[NoNamed]

mah pana la urma facuram o groaza de posturi fara nici un rost.fiecare zisa cum e corect,apoi in postul urmator se corecteaza din nou ce e mai sus si tot asa.

[M1nDH4cK]

Varianta corectata de mine(olimpic la engleza)

I really enjoyed Shrek because it is a very good movie,with a lot of funny moments.

I liked the main character, Shrek, who is in love with his girlfriend, Fiona.One day, they receive a invitation from Fiona's parents.They decide to go at the palace to see them and talk about their relationship.

From this moment the movie becomes very funny, but in some moments it  is a little sad.The main reason is Shrek's decision to run to run away because he wasn't accepted by the parents of Fiona.

So he run in the forest,where he met the puss in boots and decides to steal some magic potion from a witch to became beautiful,in hope that Fiona's parents will like him and accept him as a human, not an ogre.

So Shrek manages to steal the potion and drink it,but now he has some troubles getting to the palace.

This moments really impressioned me because they were full of action and dramatic scenes.

In the end, he manages to reach the palace before the magic effect dissapeares and remains with Fiona.At twelve o'clock the magic spell dissapeared and they became again ogres,but their love remains the same.They realised that face doesn't matter, but the feelings about the person you lobe.I liked this movie very much!

PS: Nu cred ca am gresit ceva, insa daca am facut-o, sry, am scris textul in 5 minute.

Ce nota ai luat la olimpiada monsieur ?

[Ahilosu]

pana acum varianta lui mindbot pare cea mai corecta, cea a lui lifetaker lasa mult de dort mai ales daca, dupa cum zice el, a fost la olimpiada

[radusmoko]

daca ma scormonesc la ora asta prin minte nu stiu daca pot gasi vreun topic care sa ma fi imbiat la atat ras ca asta

da bine bre,asa lume pentru o compunere de clasa a 4-a? prea tare

[{JM}Alex Lifetaker]

Corectura pe care am facut-o s-a focalizat mai mult pe cuvinte gresite si foarte putin pe structura propozitiilor pe care am lasat-o nealterata.

Eventualele greseli care au mai ramas probabil ca am trecut cu vederea peste ele, nu cred sa fi corectat ceva si sa fi inlocuit cu un cuvant gresit.

However, in urmatorul text voi reface totul, pana atunci imi permit sa analizez compunerile voastre )

NoNamed

I really liked Shrek because <b>he </b> is a very good movie,and has a lot of funny moments .

I <b>enjoy <b>(merge mai bine la Past Tense Simple) the main character,Shrek,who is in love with his girlfriend Fiona.In one day they find <b>a </b> invitation from <b>the parents of Fiona </b>(e corect si parents of Fiona dar suna mai ciudat).They decide to go at the <b>pallace </b> to see them and talk about their relationship.

From this moment the movie <b>become </b> very funny,but in some moments <b>he </b> is a little sad,because Shrek <b>decide </b> to run away because he <b>wasn't accepted </b> by <b> the parents of Fiona </b> .(de obicei se foloseste Past Tense in povestire, tu faci de toate

So he <b> runed </b> in the forest,where he <b>meet</b> the <b>poss in buts</b> and decided to steal <b>some<\b>(a, the mai bine) magic potion from a witch to <b>becamoe</b> beautiful,in hope that <b>parents of Fiona</b> will like him and accept him as a human,not an ogre.

So Shrek managed to steal the potion and drink it,but now he has some troubles getting to the pallace. (mare incurcatura cu verbele,toata propozitia e o perla)

This moments really impresioned me because they were full of action and dramatic scenes.

<b>At final</b> he managed to reach the </b>pallace</b> before the magic effect <b>dissapeare</b>(iarasi incurci timpurile) and remain with Fiona.At twelve o'clock the magic spell dissapeard and they became again ogres,but their love <b>remain</b> the same.They realised that not the face is <b>what means<b>(matters merge mai mult) <b>wehn</b> you talk about love,<b>is</b> the feelings that you <b>feel</b>(feelings you have, nu feelings you feel) for the person you love.

I liked this movie very <b>mutch</b>!

Ahilosu

I really liked Shrek because IT is a very good movie,and has a lot of funny moments .I enjoyED the main character,Shrek,who is in love with his girlfriend Fiona.In one day they found a invitation from Fiona's parents.They decided to go at the <b>pallace</b> to see them and talk about their relationship.

From this moment the movie became very funny,but in some moments <b>he</b> is a little sad,because Shrek decided to run away because he wasn't accepted by Fiona's parents.So he ran in the forest,where he met Puss in boots and decided to steal <b>some</b> magic potion from a witch to becomebeautiful,in hope that Fiona's parents will like him and accept him as a human,not an ogre.

So Shrek managed to steal the potion and drink it,but now he has some troubles geting to the <b>pallace</b>.

<b>This moments</b>(this moments?poate THESE) really impressed me because they were full of action and dramatic scenes.

At final he managed to reach the <b>pallace</b> before the magic effect dissapeared and remain with Fiona.At twelve o'clock the magic spell dissapeard and they became again ogres,but their love remained the same.They realised that not the face is what <b>means</b>(suna mai bine matters) when you talk about love,it's the feelings that you feel for the person you love.

I liked this movie very much!

(oricum o compunere mai buna, totusi unele greseli)

MINDHACK

I really liked "Shrek" because it's a very good movie and has lots of funny moments. I enjoyed the main character, Shrek, who is in love with his girlfriend Fiona. One day they found an invitation from Fiona's parents. They decided to go to the palace, see them and talk about their relationship.

From this moment on, the movie became very funny, although some moments are a bit sad, like the one where Shrek decided to run away because he wasn't accepted by Fiona's parents. So he ran into the forest, where he met Puss in Boots and decided to steal some magic potion from a witch to become beautiful, in hope that Fiona's parents will like and accept him as a human, not an ogre.

So Shrek managed to steal the potion and drink it, but had some trouble getting to the palace.

These moments really impressed me because they were full of action and dramatic scenes.

Shrek finally managed to reach the palace before the magic effect dissapeared and remain with Fiona. At twelve o'clock the magic spell wore off and they became ogres again, but their love remained the same. They realised that the feelings, not the physical aspects are of the upmost importance. I recommend this movie to everyone and hope that those who haven't seen it, someday will.

Bine realizat, fara greseli, dar a schimbat mult din structura propozitiilor(totusi in bine)

Zeal

I really liked "Shrek" because it was a very good movie and had a lot of funny moments. I enjoyed the main character, Shrek, who is in love with his girlfriend Fiona. One day they <b>recieved</b>(probabil typo) an invitation from Fiona's parents. They decided to go to the palace to see them and talk about their relationship.

From this moment <b>onward</b>, the movie became very funny, although some moments are a bit sad, like the one where Shrek decided to run away because he wasn't accepted by Fiona's parents. He ran into the forest, where he met Puss in Boots and then decided to steal a magic potion from a witch to become beautiful, <b>hopeing</b) that Fiona's parents will like him and accept him as a human, not an ogre.

So Shrek managed to steal the potion and drink it, but had some trouble getting to the palace.

These moments really impressed me because they were full of action and dramatic scenes.

Shrek finally managed to reach the palace before the magic effect dissapeared and remained with Fiona. At twelve o'clock the magic spell wore off and they became ogres again, but their love remained the same. They realised that their feelings, not the physical aspects are of the upmost importance. I recommend this movie to everyone and hope that those who haven't seen it, someday will.

Mai bine, copiat de la Mindhack si modificat niste chestii care erau bune

[{JM}Alex Lifetaker]

Asta ar trebui sa fie fara greseli

I really liked "Shrek" because it's a very good movie and has lots of funny moments. I enjoyed the main character, Shrek, who is in love with Fiona, his girlfriend. One day, they received an invitation from Fiona's parents. They decided to go to the palace, see them and talk about their relationship.

From this moment on, the movie became very funny, although some moments are a bit sad, like the one where Shrek decided to run away because he wasn't accepted by Fiona's parents. So he ran into the forest, where he met Puss in Boots and decided to steal a magic potion from a witch to become beautiful, in hope that Fiona's parents will like and accept him as a human, not an ogre.

So Shrek managed to steal the potion and drink it, but had some trouble getting to the palace.

These moments really impressed me because they were full of action and dramatic scenes.

Shrek finally managed to reach the palace before the magic effect dissapeared and remain with Fiona. At twelve o'clock the magic spell dissapeared and they became ogres again, but their love remained the same. They realised that the feelings, not the physical aspects are of the upmost importance. I recommend this movie to everyone and hope that those who haven't seen it, someday will.

PS: Mindhack, ai scris "they found an invitation" . Merge mai bine "received",(a primi), "a gasi" nu se potriveste deloc, zic eu.

Gata cu shreku sper sa nu mai apara noi variante ca devine obositor pt. saracul baiat care tot asteapta update-uri la tema lui Trimiteti alte teme daca aveti Sa avem motiv sa ne certam pe tema " cat de bine stim engleza"

[M1nDH4cK]

Asa este. Chestia e ca fiind un text dat, care a trebuit corectat, iti scapa multe chestii. De exemplu, chiar si acum, daca analizezi textul vezi ca unele propozitii sau fraze sunt de-a dreptul sofisticate, iar altele parca sunt scrise de un incepator.

[{JM}Alex Lifetaker]

Intr-adevar, iar daca ar fi sa facem o compunere la un film, eu cel putin as face-o in alt mod, dar in cazul de fata trebuie sa raman la subiect, pt. ca nu stiu pt. ce clasa se adreeseaza compunerea aceasta... nu poti sa faci o compunere de liceu la clasa a 5-a

[Guest n00b&Lamer]

Wooow..

Am ramas mirat cand am vazut cate posturi, sincer nici nu am crezut ca o sa ma ajute cineva (mam gandit findca e primul meu post..+ca sa ceva nu e obisnuit pe forum o sa se faca misto, dar nu! )

Va multumesc foarte frumos ! pentru toti, sunteti foarte de treaba

..& multumesc again !

[M1nDH4cK]

Succes. Sa ne spui ce nota ai luat .

[{JM}Alex Lifetaker]

10 normal... ce funny... o compunere de gimnaziu si am stat vreo 5 oameni la ea

[THuG-Radu]

OMFG cum de am vazut asa tarziu topicul asta ?

Wai doamne cat am putut rade.

care mai de care mai bun la engleza

GG Ahi & mind ca ajutati omu k`lumea... nu ca si restu )

[Tiek]

nice

[Devil Slayer]

Mey e o regula simpla la compunerile in engleze si asta e sa folosesti acelasi timp care e de obicei trecut,ma apuc de corectat?

[{JM}Alex Lifetaker]

Am corectat noi deja

[Devil Slayer]

Asta ar trebui sa fie fara greseli

I really liked "Shrek" because it's a very good movie and has lots of funny moments. I enjoyed the main character, Shrek, who is in love with Fiona, his girlfriend. One day, they received an invitation from Fiona's parents. They decided to go to the palace, see them and talk about their relationship.

From this moment on, the movie became very funny, although some moments are a bit sad, like the one where Shrek decided to run away because he wasn't accepted by Fiona's parents. So he ran into the forest, where he met Puss in Boots and decided to steal a magic potion from a witch to become beautiful, in hope that Fiona's parents will like and accept him as a human, not an ogre.

So Shrek managed to steal the potion and drink it, but had some trouble getting to the palace.

These moments really impressed me because they were full of action and dramatic scenes.

Shrek finally managed to reach the palace before the magic effect dissapeared and remain with Fiona. At twelve o'clock the magic spell dissapeared and they became ogres again, but their love remained the same. They realised that the feelings, not the physical aspects are of the upmost importance. I recommend this movie to everyone and hope that those who haven't seen it, someday will.

PS: Mindhack, ai scris "they found an invitation" . Merge mai bine "received",(a primi), "a gasi" nu se potriveste deloc, zic eu.

Gata cu shreku sper sa nu mai apara noi variante ca devine obositor pt. saracul baiat care tot asteapta update-uri la tema lui Trimiteti alte teme daca aveti Sa avem motiv sa ne certam pe tema " cat de bine stim engleza"

in loc de lots as fi folosit a lot of,"who was in love with Fiona",cand ai zis so he ran nu mai era nevoie de punct pt ca so continua propozitia,"not as an ogre" si alte greseli minore care merg si asa

[{JM}Alex Lifetaker]

Ntz ntz alea nu sunt greseli... e bine

[Devil Slayer]

dar asa suna mai bine ,daca mai ai nevoie ma bag si eu sau va cer si eu ca am vreo 3 compuneri de facut,din alea pt bac

[{JM}Alex Lifetaker]

Ah the pain... the horror!! No more compositions pls

[Kasabian]

omg cat talent, cata engleza

dar oare cati dintre voi stiu ca adevarata provocare nu era sa'l scrii in engleza ci sa'l scrii in romana

PS stick to what you know