Memmorex Posted December 13, 2010 Share Posted December 13, 2010 O rugaminte am si eu.Am scris un text cu engleza mea de balta si sunt curios daca am greseli si care sunt acelea. Multumesc :D . Damn.Here I am again.Like the guys from BEP would say,"I got a feeling". I got a feeling that this is going to be one of the worst posts of mine. But hell,who gives a fuck? I`ve been out of "bussiness" for some time but,again,who gives a fuck.I'm a changing person(more or less).I like change,but I also get bored very fast. And that's why I don't have such an active life "like everyone else".At least that's what my parents tell me all the time. Probably you`re wondering what I`m going to write on this...thing.Well,I`m going to write "nothing".At least that`s how I name whatever I do.This "nothing" is the image of my brain.Randomness.Yea,randomness is a word... So.Got to go.Sleeping,dreaming and all that kind of things.I know!Who the fuck sleeps nowadays?Well,me! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blk Posted December 13, 2010 Share Posted December 13, 2010 Oh wow.. de unde sa incep.. Damn. Here I am again. Like the guys from BEP would say: "I got a feeling". (consider ca e citat direct, corect e "I have a feeling") I got a feeling that this is going to be one of the worst posts I ever made. But hell, who gives a fuck? I've been out of "business" for some time but, again, who gives a fuck? I'm a changing person (more or less). I like change as I get bored very fast. And that's why I don't have such an active life "like everyone else". At least that's why my parents keep telling me. You're probably wondering what am I going to write on this.. thing. Well, I'm going to write 'nothing'. At least that's how I name 'whatever' (probabil vroiai sa zici 'anything'?). This 'nothing' is the image of my brain. Randomness. Yes, randomness is a word... So, got to go. Sleeping, dreaming and all that kind of stuff. I know! Who the fuck sleeps nowadays? Well, me! Am schimbat unele cuvinte ca n-au niciun sens. i.e. I like change,but I also get bored very fast. e nonsensica deoarece faptul ca te plictisesti repede nu contrazice propozitia anterioara. N-am idee ce ai vrut sa zici in text totusi ceea ce ar insemna ca trebuie sa il rescri cu totul :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Memmorex Posted December 14, 2010 Author Share Posted December 14, 2010 M-ai demoralizat. Pentru o secunda chiar am crezut ca stiu engleza.Dar se pare ca trebuie sa ma pun cu burta pe carte. Oricum mersi mult :D . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maledicere Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 Oh wow.. de unde sa incep.. Damn. Here I am again. Like the guys from BEP would say: "I got a feeling". (consider ca e citat direct, corect e "I have a feeling") -> defapt in scoli se preda American English nu British. Indiferent ca e pt scoala sau nu, merge both ways ^_^ I got a feeling that this is going to be one of the worst posts I ever made. But hell, who gives a fuck? I've been out of "business" for some time but, again, who gives a fuck? I'm a changing person (more or less). I like change as / because I get bored very fast. And that's why I don't have such an active life "like everyone else". At least that's why(what) my parents keep telling me. You're probably wondering,what am I going to write on this.. thing? Well, I'm going to write 'nothing'. At least that's how I name 'whatever' [i do] (probabil vroiai sa zici 'anything'?). This 'nothing' is the image of my brain. Randomness. Yes, randomness is a word... So, got to go. Sleeping, dreaming and all that kind of stuff. I know! Who the fuck sleeps nowadays? Well, me! Am schimbat unele cuvinte ca n-au niciun sens. i.e. I like change,but I also get bored very fast. e nonsensica deoarece faptul ca te plictisesti repede nu contrazice propozitia anterioara. N-am idee ce ai vrut sa zici in text totusi ceea ce ar insemna ca trebuie sa il rescri cu totul :P Noob :D <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blk Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 Prima greseala: as = because in acel context A 2-a greseala e din graba :P A 3-a greseala e o virgula lipsa? Ca nu e necesara. A 4-a 'greseala' nu cred ca e greseala, cred ca vroia sa zica "O sa scriu 'nimic'. Adica asa numesc eu "orice". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maledicere Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 Prima greseala: as = because in acel context A 2-a greseala e din graba :P A 3-a greseala e o virgula lipsa? Ca nu e necesara. A 4-a 'greseala' nu cred ca e greseala, cred ca vroia sa zica "O sa scriu 'nimic'. Adica asa numesc eu "orice". La as am pus slash, am oferit o alternativa mai "populista" avand in vedere ca textu nu e ... academic, sa zic asa. Virgula e necesara, urmeaza o interogare declarata de "What am I" ^_^ "Orice" e un termen foarte vag, am pus I do intre paranteze presupunand ca nu denumeste pe mama, tata sau catelul "orice" ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeNoR Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 "But hell" nu merge, mai bine "But then again". Anyway, s-au impiedicat intelesurile in textul asta, plus ca e si motamolit bine. Mai bine iti scriai ideile in romana si iti traducea cineva. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Memmorex Posted December 14, 2010 Author Share Posted December 14, 2010 "But hell" nu merge, mai bine "But then again". Anyway, s-au impiedicat intelesurile in textul asta, plus ca e si motamolit bine. Mai bine iti scriai ideile in romana si iti traducea cineva. Ideea de baza a fost sa imi verific engleza,care s-a dovedit a fi foarte slaba. Si nu cred ca s-ar obosii cineva sa imi traduca mie texte. Oricum,multumesc pentru corectari :D . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sensini Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 engleza ta e ok. nu e profi, dar te-ai descurca fara prea mari probleme in afara zic eu. ideile in schimb...nu stiu, n-am prea inteles textul btw, varianta lui wraithy e mai corecta decat cea a lui blk, mai putin partea cu virgula. nu e nicio interogativa acolo. corect e "You're probably wondering what I'm going to write on this...thing."...e o completiva enuntiativa in contextu asta parerea mea. Alta era situatia daca scriam: "You're probably wondering: "What is he going to write on this...thing?" " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maledicere Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 Deci. In textul initial, e asa: "You're probably wondering what am i going to write on this thing." What am I declara o interogatie. Ergo, virgula si semnul intrebarii facute cadou de mine. N'am vazut sa spuna ca defapt era "what i am" asa ca presupun ca "what am I" era ideea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sensini Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 Deci. In textul initial, e asa: "You're probably wondering what am i going to write on this thing." What am I declara o interogatie. Ergo, virgula si semnul intrebarii facute cadou de mine. N'am vazut sa spuna ca defapt era "what i am" asa ca presupun ca "what am I" era ideea. Probably you`re wondering what I`m going to write on this...thing asta era textu initial :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maledicere Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 o da ai dreptate, citisem de la blk, am crezut ca a dat quote, iar la el scrie "what am i" ... <_< noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
