Text in engleza de corectat

[Memmorex]

O rugaminte am si eu.Am scris un text cu engleza mea de balta si sunt curios daca am greseli si care sunt acelea.

Multumesc :D .

Damn.Here I am again.Like the guys from BEP would say,"I got a feeling".

I got a feeling that this is going to be one of the worst posts of mine.

But hell,who gives a fuck?

I`ve been out of "bussiness" for some time but,again,who gives a fuck.I'm a

changing person(more or less).I like change,but I also get bored very fast.

And that's why I don't have such an active life "like everyone else".At least

that's what my parents tell me all the time.

Probably you`re wondering what I`m going to write on this...thing.Well,I`m going

to write "nothing".At least that`s how I name whatever I do.This "nothing" is the

image of my brain.Randomness.Yea,randomness is a word...

So.Got to go.Sleeping,dreaming and all that kind of things.I know!Who the fuck

sleeps nowadays?Well,me! :D

[blk]

Oh wow.. de unde sa incep..

Damn. Here I am again. Like the guys from BEP would say: "I got a feeling". (consider ca e citat direct, corect e "I have a feeling")

I got a feeling that this is going to be one of the worst posts I ever made.

But hell, who gives a fuck?

I've been out of "business" for some time but, again, who gives a fuck? I'm a changing person (more or less). I like change as I get bored very fast. And that's why I don't have such an active life "like everyone else". At least that's why my parents keep telling me.

You're probably wondering what am I going to write on this.. thing. Well, I'm going to write 'nothing'. At least that's how I name 'whatever' (probabil vroiai sa zici 'anything'?). This 'nothing' is the image of my brain. Randomness. Yes, randomness is a word...

So, got to go. Sleeping, dreaming and all that kind of stuff. I know! Who the fuck sleeps nowadays? Well, me!

Am schimbat unele cuvinte ca n-au niciun sens. i.e. I like change,but I also get bored very fast. e nonsensica deoarece faptul ca te plictisesti repede nu contrazice propozitia anterioara.

N-am idee ce ai vrut sa zici in text totusi ceea ce ar insemna ca trebuie sa il rescri cu totul :P

[Memmorex]

M-ai demoralizat.

Pentru o secunda chiar am crezut ca stiu engleza.Dar se pare ca trebuie sa ma pun cu burta pe carte.

Oricum mersi mult :D .

[Maledicere]

Oh wow.. de unde sa incep..

Damn. Here I am again. Like the guys from BEP would say: "I got a feeling". (consider ca e citat direct, corect e "I have a feeling") -> defapt in scoli se preda American English nu British. Indiferent ca e pt scoala sau nu, merge both ways ^_^

I got a feeling that this is going to be one of the worst posts I ever made.

But hell, who gives a fuck?

I've been out of "business" for some time but, again, who gives a fuck? I'm a changing person (more or less). I like change as / because I get bored very fast. And that's why I don't have such an active life "like everyone else". At least that's why(what) my parents keep telling me.

You're probably wondering,what am I going to write on this.. thing? Well, I'm going to write 'nothing'. At least that's how I name 'whatever' [i do] (probabil vroiai sa zici 'anything'?). This 'nothing' is the image of my brain. Randomness. Yes, randomness is a word...

So, got to go. Sleeping, dreaming and all that kind of stuff. I know! Who the fuck sleeps nowadays? Well, me!

Am schimbat unele cuvinte ca n-au niciun sens. i.e. I like change,but I also get bored very fast. e nonsensica deoarece faptul ca te plictisesti repede nu contrazice propozitia anterioara.

N-am idee ce ai vrut sa zici in text totusi ceea ce ar insemna ca trebuie sa il rescri cu totul :P

Noob :D <_<

[blk]

Prima greseala: as = because in acel context

A 2-a greseala e din graba :P

A 3-a greseala e o virgula lipsa? Ca nu e necesara.

A 4-a 'greseala' nu cred ca e greseala, cred ca vroia sa zica "O sa scriu 'nimic'. Adica asa numesc eu "orice".

[Maledicere]

Prima greseala: as = because in acel context

A 2-a greseala e din graba :P

A 3-a greseala e o virgula lipsa? Ca nu e necesara.

A 4-a 'greseala' nu cred ca e greseala, cred ca vroia sa zica "O sa scriu 'nimic'. Adica asa numesc eu "orice".

La as am pus slash, am oferit o alternativa mai "populista" avand in vedere ca textu nu e ... academic, sa zic asa.

Virgula e necesara, urmeaza o interogare declarata de "What am I" ^_^

"Orice" e un termen foarte vag, am pus I do intre paranteze presupunand ca nu denumeste pe mama, tata sau catelul "orice" ^_^

[LeNoR]

"But hell" nu merge, mai bine "But then again".

Anyway, s-au impiedicat intelesurile in textul asta, plus ca e si motamolit bine.

Mai bine iti scriai ideile in romana si iti traducea cineva.

[Memmorex]

"But hell" nu merge, mai bine "But then again".

Anyway, s-au impiedicat intelesurile in textul asta, plus ca e si motamolit bine.

Mai bine iti scriai ideile in romana si iti traducea cineva.

Ideea de baza a fost sa imi verific engleza,care s-a dovedit a fi foarte slaba.

Si nu cred ca s-ar obosii cineva sa imi traduca mie texte.

Oricum,multumesc pentru corectari :D .

[Sensini]

engleza ta e ok. nu e profi, dar te-ai descurca fara prea mari probleme in afara zic eu.

ideile in schimb...nu stiu, n-am prea inteles textul

btw, varianta lui wraithy e mai corecta decat cea a lui blk, mai putin partea cu virgula. nu e nicio interogativa acolo. corect e "You're probably wondering what I'm going to write on this...thing."...e o completiva enuntiativa in contextu asta parerea mea. Alta era situatia daca scriam: "You're probably wondering: "What is he going to write on this...thing?" "

[Maledicere]

Deci.

In textul initial, e asa: "You're probably wondering what am i going to write on this thing."

What am I declara o interogatie. Ergo, virgula si semnul intrebarii facute cadou de mine. N'am vazut sa spuna ca defapt era "what i am" asa ca presupun ca "what am I" era ideea.

[Sensini]

Deci.

In textul initial, e asa: "You're probably wondering what am i going to write on this thing."

What am I declara o interogatie. Ergo, virgula si semnul intrebarii facute cadou de mine. N'am vazut sa spuna ca defapt era "what i am" asa ca presupun ca "what am I" era ideea.

Probably you`re wondering what I`m going to write on this...thing

asta era textu initial :P

[Maledicere]

o da ai dreptate, citisem de la blk, am crezut ca a dat quote, iar la el scrie "what am i" ... <_< noob